Explanation Text : Why Officials Does Not Get Eid Al- Fitri Bonus?
Why Officials Does Not Get Eid Al- Fitri Bonus?
President, officials and civil apparatus echelon
I and II does not receive Eid Al-Fitri
bonus this year. Soldier, Police, state civil apparatus with level echelon III and below might still get Eid Al-Fitri bonus.
This is the decision from Mr. Joko Widodo as President of Indonesia.
Why president decided that? This is because the
government allocate the budget to overcome the Corona/ COVID-19 pandemic that
affected citizens. So, for saving the budget, President made this decision. Sri
Mulyani, as Finance Minister said, the state officers what are meants are
Minister, People’s Representative Council, Regional Representative Council,
People’s Consultative Assembly and also District Head. And now still in
processing revision, appropriate with Presidents’ instruction.
Civil Servants that retirement still get bonus this year, because they are
vulnerable groups too. So, they will get bonus, according to the cycle. The
government can save 5,5 trillion rupiahs. This be save budget goes to the APBN (state
budget) to be spend on other posts.
In my opinion this decision is true. Remember many
citizens face hard way to get income from their jobs in this situation. And
also many day labourer. Governments can allocate to help health-care workers and economically struggling citizens.
I think of all good π
BalasHapusIt is good. You wrote all completely. No mechanic errors and linguistic . Generic structure and grammar also correct.Good luck for you.
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HapusIn first paragraph, there is a writing error in the form of underscores in the word *this year*. But overall it's good. Each paragraph are related to the content and generic structure is correct like an explanation text.
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BalasHapusGeneric structure and grammar is it correct. Overall in my opinion is correct π
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I think you shouldn't underlined the word "this year".
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